[CARTOON] We’re Going Scuba Diving For The Day

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Welcome to our new feature – Cartoon Of The Week. Each week we will feature a new cartoon by Jerry King. This week’s cartoon is “We’re Going Scuba Diving For The Day”.



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[Kars]

I think the text is a bit too long and explains too much.

I think this would have sufficed: "Are you moving? No, just a day of scuba diving"

Although it can be fun to mess around a bit with the scuba enthusiasts, I would keep it light because we do not need elitism.

Perhaps showing a scuba diver wanting to help out on a freediver competition, enjoying the view of mermaids..

Love to see more work!