Hello there everyone. The writer about mermaids is back. And I have good news. After far too long a time working at this -- it’s not done, just to make that clear at the front end -- including a slow job of editing the sections I have finished and over a months work of work that had to be scrapped because the story wasn’t flowing right, I have finally gotten my mermaid to her fiction Channel Islands-based island, and in the next scene, she’ll go into its waters for the first time! rofl
(Also of note, just yesterday, I wrote the word “ormer” in my story for the first time, and I just less than a minute ago added it to my spelling checker.)
I may well be writing to you much more regularly since my mermaid is in C.I. type waters and I’m sure to think of questions that can best be answered by people with direct experience.
So let me ask for your advice now. I’ve mapped my plot outline to specific dates in the calendar, since I know that what the oceanic conditions are like would vary throughout year. So, my mermaid enters the sea for he first time on October 11. What would you typically see/feel/or even hear when swimming on that date? (In the daytime). What’s normal visibility? What fish would be particularly abundant or particularly absent. I want to include a birds flying/swimming through the water to grab a fish in its bill. That would be a shock for my mermaid, to see a bird dart past her in the water. Is hat plausible for that time of year?
My understanding is that October is the stat of the rainy season for you -- or has a huge increase in rainfall, at least -- but I do feel justified in weighting the weather in my mermaid’s favor for now, so I won’t be raining. Maybe later in the day, but not during her swim.
Also, I should mention that my fictional inland of Tane is a cross between a lot of Sark and a little Jersey, with my mermaid entering the sea in the Jersey-ish part (from a place roughly based on the harbour outside Gorey Castle.) So I don’t know how much experience you have swimming near the other islands or really how much that matters, but please bear that factor in mind.
Also, wen you say that water is milky, (this elated to recent posts, not my previous question) is that more caused by churning water or growth of plankton? Or is it both?
Oh, and happy (belated by a few weeks) Liberation Day!! :friday